Sunday, November 16, 2014

Week 13: Famous Last Words

Well, this weekend has been great so far! OUIS had a Date Auction this weekend for our Philanthrophy, Baal Dhan, and we raised over $1200! It turned out to be a success and I couldn't be more relieved and happy. I worked all day Saturday and Sunday and came home tonight ready to tackle my homework... but it turns out that we don't have school tomorrow! Woohoo. That gives me one extra day to procrastinate. Haha. This snow day really makes me happy though because I have no classes Tuesday and this means that I get a 4 day weekend. Super pumped for that.

This coming week is going to be extremely busy. I have my last training for my Internship, 3 meetings, and a bunch of driving from Norman to OKC. I also have to keep up with my classes and start packing for Thanksgiving Break. I'm so excited to leave for Florida next Monday! I haven't seen my mom in over 2 months and I miss her like crazy. I think it'll be the perfect break from Norman and school.

Grades are starting to stress me out though and I hope that I can bring them up to par asap. Not much time left till this semester ends and I know I can't fall behind now. Hopefully everything works out though! Keeping my fingers crossed. :)



Snow on OU's Campus!
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Monday, November 10, 2014

Week 13: Reading Diary B


Buck's Mahabharata
Reading Notes: Pages 247-305
Notes and Thoughts:
  • Amba's story seems irrelevant 
  • Sikhandini's story is interesting and i'm glad that he managed to trade genders with Sthuna... but the curse that is placed on Sthuna for helping Sikhandini, is sad. I guess sink Sikhandini is going to war though, there's more likely a risk of him dying and Sthuni being able to convert back to a male
  • I am very confused as to why Arjuna teams up with Sikhandin to kill Bhishma, but then is so great to Bhishma when Bhishma is attacked and dying? He brings him water and makes him a pillow... WHY?! He was the one that injured/killed Bhishma.... It doesn't make sense
  • Kind of funny how Jayadratha's own curse backfires on him. He literally makes his own head explode. Haha. What a dummy. 
  • I wish Buck had told the elephant Ashwatthaman story more clearly. It's actually very clever and funny
  • I had no idea that Krishna stopped Ashwatthaman's weapon from working though. That's interesting. 
  • Sanjaya feels sorrow for Duryodhana and helps him conceal himself in the lake. I hope the people that Sanjaya tells about where Duryodhana is concealed are on his side. Slightly confused with so many character names and people constantly switching sides.

Week 13: Reading Diary A

Buck's Mahabharata
Reading Notes: Pages 191-246
Notes and Thoughts:

  • Glad Yama is able to revive his four brothers who suck at listening to directions
  • Lots of characters in Virata's court. It'll be difficult to keep track of all those names
  • I don't understand the point of Karna and Indra... So what happens at the end? Does Indra get the jewelry he wants? What does Karna do with the infallible throwing dart?
  • I can't believe that Draupadi is assaulted. Her life just seems so miserable and sad to me. I feel like so many people have tried to harm her. 
  • It's weird how Buck replaces Arjuna's son Abhimanyu as Uttara's husband? I don't really know how I feel about that. 
  • I like how Krishna gives Arjuna the choice of either having Krishna as his ally or taking Krishna's entire army. That's a difficult choice but I think having Krishna as an ally would be a lot smarter than having Krishna's army. Krishna probably has so many connections. 
  • I wish Arjuna and Duryodhana listened to Krishna and just claimed peace instead of fighting. 

Monday, November 3, 2014

Week 12: Reading Diary B

Buck's Mahabharata
Reading Notes: Pages 139-189
Notes and Thoughts:

  • I don't think it's Arjuna's fault that he doesn't like Urvashi. For her to curse him because he doesn't love her back seems dumb. Indra helps Arjuna use that curse to his advantage though, which is good.
  • I also don't remember even reading Mankanaka's story in Narayan's Mahabharata. Either I really was not paying attention or this version is A LOT clearer and easier to understand
  • Rishyashringa and Shanta's story is cute and sweet. I'm glad that Shanta doesn't just leave him after she makes him fall for her and come all the way to city and bring rain. 
  • Arjuna is returned back to Earth. That's always good
  • In this version of the Mahabharata, the Pandavas aren't the ones that end up rescuing Duryodhana? Wow. That's a huge change.
  • Jayadratha seems like a minor and pointless character... but a good one to spin a weekly story form
  • Savitri and Satyavan's tale is also very interesting and deep. I applaud her for her devotion to her husband and the untiring hope she had so he could live more than one year with her. I would definitely do the same if I fell in love with a man that I knew only had one year left to live.

Week 12: Reading Diary A

Buck's Mahabharata
Reading Notes: Pages 93-138
Notes and Thoughts:


  • Yudhishthira is seriously an idiot for gambling not only his worldly possessions, but also his brothers and HIMSELF. I'm not against gambling when you're betting like $10-20... but when you start getting addicted and bet important things like your possessions and PEOPLE. That's taking it WAY too far. 
  • I'm glad that Krishna came through and saved Draupadi from embarrassment. She had every right to hit Duhshasana
  • Arjuna goes to heaven once he enters exile?
  • Glad Damyavanti was smart enough to spot out the real Nala from all the fakes
  • I know that Nala ditches Damyavanti for her own good. But I don't understand why guys don't understand that if a girl is willing to stand by your side through even the ROUGHEST of times, then she should not be driven or pushed away. Instead, Nala should have thanked her and been glad to have company in that dark forest.
  • Damyavanti would not have been kidnapped or hurt if Nala had just taken her with him.. I'm glad that she goes home to her father though and that he agrees to help her find Nala
  • It's weird how the knowledge of gambling is what causes Kali to leave Nala's body. Interesting. 
  • Even though Nala now knows the science of gambling, I still feel like it's dumb for him to gamble everything. I guess it's difference since right now he has nothing to lose and everything to gain
  • Lol @ Yudhishthira for learning the science of gambling now

Sunday, November 2, 2014

Week 11: Famous Last Words

This past week, I think that my favorite piece of writing was my story about Sita in my Storybook. I'm going to be honest, I'm extremely glad that I kept up with my points and assignments so I don't have to write another story. I'm not saying that I hated writing those stories or doing the Storybook project, they're just super time consuming. Writing a StoryBook story usually takes me at least an hour to two hours... and that's not even counting the revisions and stuff.

It's so weird to think that this class is coming to an end already. I can't believe we only have a month left of this semester. It's been a really rough semester and i'm beyond excited to be done with it and move on to new classes and new things. I enrolled for my classes next semester and I'm convinced that next semester will be hell. I'm taking Biochemical Methods, Eco & Path, Molecular Bio, and possibly Physiology as my main classes. I also enrolled in what I hope are a couple of blow-offs, like Yoga, Modern World Music, and Medical Ethics. Next semester will be tough, but I think i'm ready to take it all on. Hopefully I learned my lesson from this semester and have better work ethic next semester.

I'm crazy excited to go home for Thanksgiving Break. I have a countdown on my phone that reminds me how close I am and how I just need to power through the next couple of weeks. It'll be really nice to spend Thanksgiving in Florida with my family and get away from Norman. Sometimes you just get sick of seeing the same people and going through the same motions every single day. I think Florida will be the perfect break. It'll allow me to come back rejuvenated and ready to dominate the end of my semester. 

Besides that, not much happened this week. Oh, I did spend 75% of my weekend at OU's Medical School with my friend Serena! It really helped me clear my head. I enjoyed hearing all her stories about Med School and looking at her notes and just studying with her. Walking around her Mod and meeting all these awesome Medical School students made me so excited to be here doing the same thing one day. It was also a nice change of scenery. Studying in the same 3 places in Norman everyday gets boring. It felt good to be surrounded by students who were so passionate and dedicated to their studies. It really gave me a reality check and helped me realize my priorities.




I aspire to be studying here as a Medical School student one day.
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Thursday, October 30, 2014

Week 11 Storytelling: Goodbye Khandava Forest


Agni was SO fed up with everything. This forest had been tempting him for months! Every morning he woke up and could smell the soft clean scent of the pine trees and the deep dark fragrance of the oaks. He could see the luscious leaves and the tough giant trunks. He wanted to eat them, eat them ALL, every single one of those trees in that forest. 

There was just one GIANT problem: Indra. Every single time Agni set out on a mission to burn even ONE of those trees, Indra used his storm powers and rained all over Agni's parade. Agni just couldn't seem to catch a break and he was getting extremely frustrated. There were so many other forests in the state, why couldn't Indra just let Agni have this tiny little forest? And it's not like Agni wasn't leaving any good things behind... A nice healthy fire was needed once in a while. It would replenish the soil, kill off some animals that were weighing down the food chain, and just clear the ecosystem a little bit. Indra was stubborn though and enjoyed raining down on Agni's plans. Indra wanted to show Agni that he was far more powerful than Agni would ever be. He wanted Agni to know that rain would always triumph over fire. 

One day, Agni had a brilliant idea. People all over town always talked about how kind and helpful Arjuna and Krishna were. Surely they could help Agni attain Khandava Forest. That's all Agni wanted. He knew after he ate that forest, his mind would be at ease for years to come and he could then focus more on doing his job as the King of Fire.

He approached Krishna and Arjuna and explained his problem. To his surprise, they were actually extremely understanding. They told him they were happy to help and had actually always wanted to mess with Indra. This would be their break from their busy lives. Agni is beyond delighted and offers Arjuna and Krishna a reward if the job is properly done and Agni gets what he wants. 

Later that night, while everyone was fast asleep. Krishna and Arjuna gave Agni the go-ahead and told him to get started on burning Khandava. Not soon after Agni started burning the forest down, Indra smelled and felt the smoke around him and rose from his slumber. HOW DARE AGNI TRY TO GO BEHIND HIS BACK AND TAKE KHANDAVA WHEN INDRA HAD SPECIFICALLY SAID NO! Indra, beyond upset, rushed down from the sky ready with his monstrous rain clouds and giant thunderbolt. Arjuna and Krishna knew this was coming and were ready to distract Indra. Arjuna used his super fast speed and great aim to disperse the rain clouds all over the state, far far away from Khandava. While Krishna used his energy and power and shattered the giant thunderbolt right out of Indra's hands. Indra was now powerless; without his thunderbolt and clouds, he was nothing. Defeated Indra watched as Agni happily ate the entire Khandava forest. 

After Agni was satisfied, he called Krishna and Arjuna over and presented Arjuna, the bow Gandiva, and Krishna, his iron discus. Krishna and Arjuna happily welcome the presents and leave satisfied knowing that they helped someone in need and also got to teach Indra a lesson. There is always a line between being cocky and being confident. Hopefully Indra now knew where he stood and would never forget that helpless moment where he had no power. 



Agni fulfilling his desires of eating Khandava Forest
(Image Information: Image retrieved from Tech Times)


Author's Note: This story was based off of Buck's Mahabharata, specifically, Reading Guide B. As I was skimming through the reading guide, this small little story stuck out to me. It made me happy to think that Krishna and Arjuna took time out to help Agni with his problem. I left out the part where Agni shows up to Krishna and Arjuna as a "woodsman with gold skin and dressed in black rags, his mouth smeared with butter." I wasn't sure if that line was a metaphor for something or if Agni actually did show up with gold skin and an oily mouth? It didn't really make much sense to me, so I left it out. I added a lot of personification to Agni's character but also tried to stay within the plot. 

Bibliography: Buck, William (1973). Mahabharata.









Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Week 11: Reading Diary B

Buck's Mahabharata
Reading Notes: Pages 49-91
Notes and Thoughts:


  • I think that Buck's Mahabharata has so much more detail than the Narayan's Mahabharata. It's different kinds of detail. In Narayan's, Drona's son was at least mentioned and talked about a little. In Buck's, I don't remember reading about him at all
  • I also had no idea that Drupada set an archery test that only Arjuna can pass...
  • Buck's story also makes much more sense to me, I feel like it's a lot less complicated than Narayan's
  • I like the story about Arjuna and Krishna helping Agni ward of Indra and burn the forest down 
  • I also don't remember Maya being part of this story in the last Mahabharata that we read, it could easily be because I didn't pay attention. But overall, I am a bigger fan of Buck's version
  • Vyasa is a smart guy, taking his mother, Ambika, Ambalika, and the mother of Vidura away in the forest so they don't have to be a part of or witness the war that is bound to occur after this giant gambling game

Monday, October 27, 2014

Week 11: Reading Diary A

Buck's Mahabharata
Reading Notes: Pages 1-47
Notes and Thoughts:


  • Well, now we know why Ganesha has an elephant head instead of a human one
  • We also now know why Shiva's throat is blue. I like knowing the small little details behind these things. It reminds me of the fables my parents used to read to me when I was little. There was always some sort of silly reason why the Giraffe had spots and the Elephants had wrinkles and Tigers had stripes.
  • The story of Ganga is super sad and if I was Shantanu I would definitely break my promise about not asking why she was killing their babies
  • The fish and semen story is kind of funny. It's sad for Chedi though because he is never able to meet his daughter or even know that she exists
  • It sucks that Pandu can never make love to anyone again and has to exile himself into the Himalayas. Welp. Actually, he did make love to his wife and then died. It must be true love since she joins him
  • Gandhari is pregnant with ONE HUNDRED sons?! The hard ball of flesh and cutting it into 100 sons and 1 daughter and then sealing them into jars for two years is super weird
  • It's sad that Drona tells Arjuna to capture King Drupada as a "teacher's fee"

Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Week 10 Storytelling: Karma Always Wins

     Every single day on the dot at 4:00 pm, Ishaan took a walk around town. Ishaan was a well known guru that was very respected and loved. He was honest, loyal, caring, and helped everyone around town make the right decisions. People would even travel from different villages just so Ishaan could help settle their fight/arguments and give them non-biased advice. There however, was this old woman named Anjali who LOATHED Ishaan. She hated the attention he received, the love from all the townspeople, and his reputation that he had created for himself. She was jealous and she knew it. But she admitted this to no one.

      Everyday when Ishaan took his walk around the small little town, he would pass by her house and every single day she would be waiting for him. The second he was under her window, she would take her trash and dump it on Ishaan. The townspeople saw this and asked Ishaan if he wanted them to go beat her up or punish her but Ishaan always had the same response, "One day, she will learn her lesson. Just let her do what she's doing. Brahma sees all and Karma will take it's toll." So the townspeople left her alone and Ishaan continued to silently take the hate from Anjali.

     A couple days passed by and as Ishaan was taking his daily walk, he noticed that Anjali was not at her window. The third day when Anjali was a no-show, he knew that something must be wrong. Anjali had loyally stood at her window for over a year throwing her trash at him, why stop now?! He raced up her building stairs and knocked on the door that corresponded with her window. No answer. Worriedly, he asked the guard of the building if he had seen Anjali. Weirdly, no one had. Thinking the worst, Ishaan banged down her door, and lo and behold, found Anjali passed out in bed. Her fragile wrinkled body looked feverish and she seemed pale and weak. He quickly called a doctor and had her checked. The doctor told Ishaan that she would need a lot of care and nursing if Anjali was to get better.

     Ishaan sat by her bedside feeding her and nursing her according to the doctor's orders. He fed her, cleaned her, read her stories, and took insanely good care of her. After a couple of days, Anjali was doing better then when she had started. Ashamed, she looked at Ishaan and asked him why he had chosen to be so good to her, especially after everything she had done to him, why had Ishaan chosen to take care of her and be there for her? She didn't deserve this. She didn't deserve this much care and love from someone who she had treated so poorly. Tears streaming down her face, she grabbed Ishaan's hand and begged for forgiveness. She knew that she had messed up and that her jealousy and anger had taken over her right senses.

    Ishaan took Anjali's hand and sat down next to her. He told her how he had known why Anjali hated him and he knew that anything he would have tried to do to win her over, would have just made her more mad. He hoped she realized now that Ishaan was not a threat, but a friend. He told her how he had left it all up to Brahma and the other god's and that he believed that Karma would teach her a lesson. Ishaan then accepted her apology and told her he was overjoyed to have gained another friend and that he was happy that Anjali had learned her lesson. 


Anjali throwing trash from her window 
(Image Information: Photo retrieved from Daily Mail Online)



Author's Note: This story is loosely based on a reading I did this week from Reading Guide A. Duryodhana decides to make a camp near the Pandavas to humiliate them. The gandharvas take Duryodhana captive during a battle and the Pandavas end up actually being the ones who free Duryodhana. Duryodhana's plan to humiliate the Pandavas backfires entirely. Similarly in this story, Anjali has a plan to embarrass Ishaan and humiliate him completely. But Ishaan is actually the one that rescues Anjali from a near-death sickness. Anjali's plan backfires completely and she is the one left humiliated. 

Bibliography: Narayan, R.K. (1978). The Mahabharata














Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Week 10: Reading Diary B

Narayan's Mahabharata
Reading Notes: Pages 133-179
Notes and Thoughts:


  • Duryodhana really should have listened to his mother and Krishna. Mother's are ALWAYS right and I have a feeling that Duryodhana will realize this sooner than later
  • I like that Krishna and Arjuna use teamwork to kill Jayadratha. The discus is a smart idea to make Jayadratha come out of hiding
  • Wow, the way that Drona dies is pretty sad. It's a smart move on Krishna and Bhima's part though.. Naming an elephant Ashwatthaman and killing it is a very smart idea because now it makes the sentence the truth when Drona asks Yudhishthira if Ashwatthaman is dead
  • Karma seems to be doing the right thing when Duryodhana dies, he has caused a lot of misery and bloodshed. 
  • I wish there had been more about Krishna and his divine form. Not pleased about how Krishna and all his people die, but I feel like this how most of the Indian Epics end

Monday, October 20, 2014

Week 10: Reading Diary A

Narayan's Mahabharata
Reading Notes: Pages 85-131
Notes and Thoughts:


  • I'm glad that Duryodhana's plan didn't work to humiliate the Pandavas. Funny how Duryodhana wanted to humiliate the Pandavas and the Pandavas were the ones that freed Duryodhana from captivity
  • It's also confusing why Nakula, Sahadeva, Arjuna, Bhima can't just answer the questions and be obedient. Good thing Yudhishthira listened or he would have been dead too
  • I thought Bhima, Nakula, and Sahadeva were dead? Is this them being reincarnated as something else? I'm glad that Bhima avenges Draupadi's rape, but what doesn't make sense is why the King and Queen want Draupadi sent away...
  • I really don't get why the Pandavas get rejected when they come to make another bid for peace... If their bid was accepted, then everything would be SO much easier. All this jealousy and anger and hatred just lead to more fatalities

Thursday, October 16, 2014

Week 9 Storytelling: Never Good Enough

    Drona was a man of patience, virtue, and outstanding martial skills. He was the best of the best and many families pursued him to train their children. He had a son named Ashwatthaman who loved and obeyed him. Ashwatthaman started attending trainings and practices with his father since he could walk, just hoping to one day be as good as him. He strived for his father's praise and acceptance but he felt like no matter what he did, he was never good enough. No matter how hard he trained, who he beat in practices, or how loyal he was to helping his dad with his practice, none of these things seemed to matter to Drona.
    One day, his father got a letter in the mail from two of the grandest families in the city: The Pandavas and the Kauravas. Ashwatthaman wasn't surprised that his father was wanted by people this rich and grand, he knew how good his father was at his job and how humble he was about being the best guru in town. He sometimes wished that he had enough money to maybe one day, pay his dad and reserve a session just for them two. He wanted to hang out with his dad and bond with him but it always seemed like his dad had other things on his mind.
    Undoubtedly, Drona accepted the invitation to train the Pandavas and the Kauravas. Ashwatthaman happily trailed along hoping to impress his father further and gain some quality time with him. Little did he know that this would just create a bigger rift between the two of them. Walking into the house, Ashwatthaman was surprised to see a line of boys around his age, lined up on the stairs, waiting for his father. He cowered behind his father as his father used his most powerful voice to direct the boys to their first training. Ashwatthaman quickly realized that this was his golden ticket... If he could train with these boys everyday and then show his father how good he was and how he could easily beat them, then maybe his father would finally be proud of him and give him the praise and love that he had been yearning for.
    Weeks passed and Ashwatthaman loyally trained with his father and the Pandavas and Kauravas. Soon enough, his father announced that there would be a test. The test would determine who could move on to the next level of training and who would be stuck repeating level 1. The goal of the test was to be able to use a bow and arrow and use the skills that they had learned to focus and shoot the counterfeit bird that Drona would be controlling. Ashwatthaman knew that he had this test in the bag. He had shot that silly bird so many times and was beyond confident that he would be able to wow his dad and all the students trying.
    Morning of the test, Ashwatthaman woke up early and quickly showered and got ready. He had breakfast waiting on the table for his dad before he even awakened out of his slumber. He knew these brownie points would come in handy. Drona walked out from his room, not even acknowledging the breakfast that his son had made for him and urged Ashwatthaman to hurry up so they could leave. It was test day and Drona was stressed that all his training wouldn't give him the results that he wanted to see from his pupils. Disheartened, Ashwatthaman quietly trailed behind his dad as they walked quietly to the testing site in the woods. When they got there, he instantly noticed how nervous each kid was and laughed in his head as he realized how proud his father was going to be after he shot that dumb bird.
     One by one, Drona's pupils took their turns at shooting. Surprisingly, no one had been able to shoot the bird yet. Drona started feeling nervous that none of his pupils had learned anything from all this training. He prayed to Krishna hoping for a sign that he was still doing the right thing and that all his effort had not gone to waste. Even if ONE of his students could hit this bird, he would be satisfied. Two students were now left, his son Ashwatthaman and this scrawny little boy named Arjuna. Drona decided to let the boys shoot at the bird at the same time. This would increase the interest of the others and turn this into a friendly competition. The class gathered around and both Arjuna and Ashwatthaman took their stance with their bows and waited patiently for the bird to appear.
     Ashwatthaman knew that this was it. He HAD to shoot this bird. If this tiny little kid Arjuna beat him, he would never be able to live it down from his dad and then he would never gain his respect. Ashwatthaman focused on his breathing and technique and drowned the rest of the world out. His eyes swept the surrounding trees hoping that he would catch sight of the bird first. Then suddenly out of the corner of his eye, he saw the bright red bird flitting through the trees! He knew it was now or never. He took aim and then steadily let his arrow fly. Whoosh! He heard an arrow achieve contact with the bird and looked up excitedly to see how evenly he had hit the bird... Before he could even process what was going on, he watched his dad run up past him, up to Arjuna, and embrace him in a giant hug. All the kids in the class were running up to Arjuna and high-fiving him and chanting his name. Ashwatthaman's stomach dropped to his feet as he realized what had happened... It wasn't his arrow that had hit the bird, it was Arjuna's.
    He looked at his father happily chatting with Arjuna, listened to the kids chanting Arjuna's name, and it finally just hit him. There was no winning. Drona would never fully accept Ashwatthaman. No matter what he did or how hard he tried, Ashwatthaman would always be stuck on the back burner. He held back his tears, gathered his stuff, and then slowly began the long walk home.


This picture symbolizes the red bird that Arjuna shot 
(Image Information: Image retrieved from Michigan Nature)



Author's Note: This story is based off of this week's reading regarding Drona and his pupils. In Narayan's Mahabharata, Arjuna easily becomes Drona's favorite because he shoots the bird and saves him from the crocodile. I excluded the crocodile part because I felt like instead of adding the crocodile part, I focused more on his son, Ashwatthaman's emotions and feelings and based the story off of that. The actual story focused more on Arjuna, but when I was reading this, my thoughts were with Ashwatthaman and how he must be feeling knowing that Arjuna was his father's favorite.


Bibliography:     Narayan, R. K (1978). The Mahabharata.









Wednesday, October 15, 2014

Week 9: Reading Diary B



Narayan's Mahabharata
Reading Notes: Pages 41-83.
Important Notes and Thoughts
  • Draupadi having so many husbands is still a weird concept to me. I don't know how I feel about 5 men sharing her. 
  • Yudihishthira has a very negative vibe. I don't like that he gambles everything away like that. I personally have nothing against gambling, but I hate it when people gamble more than they should. Gambling $20 is very different than gambling away everything you have and the lives of other people. It doesn't seem like a very fair deal to me. He also gets a second chance but instead throws it away by having everyone exiled for 13 years
  • Arjuna is a character that I want to keep my eye on. I feel like that will be a good story to re-tell sooner or later in one of my blog posts.








Monday, October 13, 2014

Week 9: Reading Diary A

Narayan's Mahabharata
Reading Notes: Pages 1-39

Important Notes and Thoughts:


  • If I were the husband, I would definitely be concerned if my wife started drowning all my new-born babies... I would question her even if I wasn't supposed too. So i'm glad that Shantanu questioned his wife before she drowned her 8th baby
  • I feel like the indian culture is SO strict. The King of Shalwa won't marry Amba because she stepped foot into another man's house? That seems a bit preposterous. I'm thankful that my culture isn't as strict. I guess Amba's anger is fair but her want for revenge against Bhishma isn't fair at all. It isn't his fault that he wants the best for his sons? He did send her away when he found out about her prior commitment. Maybe she should have told him earlier?
  • The way that these children are born is very funny. Ambika closes her eyes cause she does't like his appearance so her child is blind? Ambalika turns pale at the sight of Vyasa so her child is pale? Good thing the maid feels positively about poor Vyasa. 
  • Wow. The Pandavas and Kauravas stories are pretty epic. A lot of kids and characters. Glad each son is able to have children though...
  • Drona, Drupada, and Arjuna's story is quite confusing. So many past relations, enemies, and characters
  • The Pandavas are smart for setting the house on fire and making it look like they are dead
  • Draupadi story reminds me of the popular theme of reincarnation. She had 5 husbands in her past life and wanted them back and the Lord Ishvara answers her prayers.

Monday, October 6, 2014

Week 8: Reading Diary

    I think that the reading diaries are actually really helpful. Instead of having to back-track and read the last guide or read the last couple of chapters, I just go back to my reading diaries. I think the reading diaries also come in handy when it's time to write a story. Sometimes I look at the prompts, but usually I can just look at my reading diaries and pick a topic that I want to write about. My reading diaries aren't super structured and they aren't a certain length every time. It all just depends on my opinions when I am reading. I really like the fact that there isn't a certain length or picture requirement. The reading diary is my own thing and I like that I can control it.

    The reading diaries are just thoughts and topics that stand out to me when reading the book and guide. I try not to summarize the stuff I read and instead write my own thoughts and opinions on what i'm reading. This helps me remember the storyline better and also helps me when I'm writing my own story. I've looked at other reading diaries in our class and I think everyone has their own style. Some people write essays about what they read, some right just a couple of lines, and others just post a bunch of pictures with captions. I think there isn't a right or wrong way to write a diary. Whatever works for the person is really all that is needed.

    In general, I do remember the reading that I do in this class. Compared to Microbiology and Organic Chemistry, this reading is a lot more interesting and easier to understand and memorize. A big difference for my other classes is that those are just exam-based. I usually just read enough to study for those exams, but for this class you have to read everything to know what's going on. I think that the easiest way for me to memorize things is by relating things back to my life. When I can find some way to connect to the material, it makes it a lot easier to memorize.

Sunday, October 5, 2014

Week 7: Famous Last Words

I think that my best writing this past week was my first story in my Storybook. I enjoyed writing that story and hope that I can do a better job on my next one. This past week, I worked ahead and it made a HUGE difference. I felt a lot less stressed not having Epics of India homework due every night. I think that I need to continue doing this so that I can manage my time better with my other classes. Besides that, this past week was alright. I had an Organic Chemistry quiz that went really well and my weekend turned out to actually be really fun.

A lot of exciting things are coming up, OU/TX, Halloween, and last but not least, the start of my FAVORITE SEASON! NBA SEASON! Tip-off is in less than 24 days and I could not be more excited. Can't wait to cheer on the Thunder!

This past week I read some really good portfolios and StoryBooks. I think the one Storybook that stood out to me the most was one that started with a background about 4 kids. Each kid had a different personality and each personality helped to tell a different fable. I read a lot of "Fable based Storybooks" from the past classes and they seemed good but very generic and ordinary. This Storybook was amazing! The introduction made me almost believe that the writer had children. The pictures and color scheme were perfect for the Storybook. The first story was great and the child's personality helped form the story which was a really cool concept. I look forward to reading the rest of her stories! I also read another good Storybook from an author that depicted the Indian Epics as a Reality TV show. The stories were portrayed very cleverly and the narrator did a fantastic job of staying near the show's script! I'm excited to keep reading more story books and seeing the way that different students portray the epics.

Links to those Storybooks are listed below!





The Oklahoma City Thunder
(Image Information: Photo retrieved from Bleacher Report)



Friday, October 3, 2014

Typing Game Tech Tip

I taught myself how to type because of school and because of silly communication methods back in the day like AIM and MySpace/Xanga. I loved AIM so much and I remember constantly blocking up my mother's telephone line because I just always wanted to be in all the group chats and not miss out on any of the fun. I am thankful for all those things now though, because my typing has improved dramatically. In high school and college, typing becomes almost a necessity. You have to be able to type to work on your papers and college essays. Nowadays, technology has advanced so much that you can actually install this software on your computer called Dragon and speak to it and have it type out everything you say. Nevertheless, typing is still pretty important!

My favorite game was the "Typing Racer Game". You pick your level of typing and then you race against other players by typing out the correct punctation and sentence. I definitely spent over 15 minutes just on that game. "Ninja Cat and Zombie Dinosaurs" and "Type For Your Life" were also really fun games as well.


Wednesday, October 1, 2014

Week 7 Storytelling: Ravana's Letter

    As soon as Rama slays Ravana, Shuka walks up to him and hands him a thick golden envelope that has "Rama" scribed onto it in beautiful calligraphy. Rama looks questioningly at Shuka and Shuka just kind of shrugs his shoulders and walks away. Rama, exhausted from the battle with Ravana, sits down underneath the colossal pear tree to cool off and says a quick prayer to Brahma hoping the letter isn't soImething dreadful before ripping it open. He pulls out two thick pieces of parchment paper with scrawly handwriting and quickly flips to the second page to see who this letter is from. In big bold writing he sees, "Your dearest Ravana." Rama, annoyed by the fact that his worst enemy has written him some kind of "letter", instantly just loses his jubilant attitude from defeating Ravana. He takes a deep breath and starts from the beginning. 

"Dear Vishnu, 

     I'm hoping you never read this letter because that would mean that I am dead and that Shuka has done his job. But since you are reading this, I must, for some very odd and deceitful reason, be dead. Anyways, since I am now dead, I hope that you can forgive me for all my wrong doings. I know that I have done some horrendous things to you and for that I apologize from the bottom of my dead heart. Kidnapping Sita, capturing Hanuman, tricking Sita into thinking you were dead, spying on your army, making Indrajit fight my battles for me and dying on my behalf, etc. Karma has clearly ran it's course since I am now dead. I know that I have caused many deaths and a magnitude of grief and sorrow to people everywhere, but I am now repenting for my sins. I am sorry for all of this Vishnu. Please do yourself a favor and take Sita back. She is innocent. I am not going to lie, I tried numerous times to seduce her and urged her to give in to me, but she refused. She is loyal to you, and you only. She loves you more than she loves herself and you deserve to be happy with the beautiful and charming Sita. Take her Vishnu. Go retrieve her from the Ashoka Grove where I have trapped her and claim her as yours once again. Do not make the mistake of losing the woman that would abandon the world for you. 
                                            Your dearest,
                                                                Ravana"

    Rama finishes the letter, scoffs, and rips it into shreds. Who does Ravana think he is? Trying to guilt trip him into liking him or feeling bad for him? Ravana deserved to die. Ravana had caused so much chaos and misery in his life that his fate had been written for him a long time ago. Rama knew exactly what Ravana's intentions were and was not falling for his sick twisted plan for even one second. Rama looked up at the small crowd gathered around him while he was reading the letter, laughed out loud, and said, "Go, go, I do not care what all this means."





The golden envelope that Shuka delivers to Rama
(Image Information: Photo retrieved from Golden Envelope)


Author's Note: I wrote this story with the purpose of conveying Rama's thoughts as he read Ravana's letter. The most important changes in this story were the contents of the letter. I kept the ending the same with Rama kind of blowing off the letter that Ravana wrote to him. 

Bibliography: Buck, William (1976). Ramayana: King Rama's Way



Week 7: Reading Diary B

Buck's Ramayana
Reading Notes: Pages 374-432

Important Notes and Thoughts:

  • Wow, that makes me so angry that even though Sita was SO loyal to him and didn't so much as even let Ravana touch her, Rama still would rather listen to gossip than his own wife
  • I literally can not believe that he is such a big people pleaser and is abandoning the love of his life for gossip and approval
  • That whole paragraph regarding Sita being banished because of Karma is really confusing and doesn't make any sense to me
  • Well I guess Lava and Kush are born without a father that cares for them...
  • Why would Rama invite Sita's dad to his festival and keep a golden deer in her spot when HE was the one that abandoned her? It's funny how he realizes that Kush and Lava are his sons
  • So Sita asks to basically die if it is true that she didn't cheat... since she didn't, she dies? Doesn't make sense. 
  • Makes me sad that Lakshmana breaks into Kala and Rama's meeting for Durvasa and dies.. 
  • Hanuman's loyalty is incredible. He's more loyal than anyone. 
  • Why does Rama jump into the river.. basically committing suicide?

Tuesday, September 30, 2014

Week 7: Reading Diary A

Buck's Ramayana
Reading Notes: Pages 325-373

Important Notes and Thoughts:


  • Happy that Lightning Tongue and Thunder Tooth get killed. I didn't like them ever since they tried to fool Sita. 
  • The fighting scenes definitely make reading this part of the book a lot more exciting. I like being able to imagine Ravana and Rama fighting and watching Rama slay off Ravana's head but it simultaneously growing back
  • Ravana is dead. Rama wins
  • The letter from Ravana to Rama is definitely a plot twist. It makes me happy that Buck added that in there. It shows Ravana's true character. If only that letter had arrived earlier... 
  • It's great to see how supportive Vibishana and Hanuman and Jambavan are of Rama. They fly out for his coronation
  • I think that Baratha's suicide threat is kind of extreme. What if Rama gets stuck somewhere and doesn't make it in time? Would Baratha really just kill himself and leave his city King-less?

Thursday, September 25, 2014

Week 6 Storytelling: Ravana's Magicians

   There was once a fox who loved eating goats. He would dream of their tender, supple, fleshy meat every time he closed his eyes. During the day, he would longingly gaze at the goats and feel his mouth helplessly water when thinking of taking a giant bite out of the fattest goat. He always thought about stealing one of the goats when the herder was distracted, but never found the courage to do so.
   One day, he got really tired of constantly wanting something but not being able to achieve it. He devised a sneaky plan. He figured if he dressed up as a goat and got herded into the goat shed at night, he could feast on ALL the goats he wanted and no one would be able to stop him. His dream could finally be accomplished! And instead of being able to eat one goat, he could take his sweet time and eat a dozen! Getting super excited, the fox made his costume and around evening time, sneakily immersed himself into the herd of goats. He chuckled to himself slyly as he wandered around the goats, mentally picking the ones he would feast on at night.
   Soon enough, the sun started setting and the herder started herding the goats into the shed. Luckily for the fox, the herder seemed to be in a hurry and just wanted to get all the goats into the shed before sunset. The doors of the shed finally closed and the fox stood right at the front of the doors overlooking all his foolish prey that had no idea what was coming for them. But before he could pick out his first delectable meal, the doors flung wide open... light from the setting sun streamed through the doors onto the goats and in walked the herder. Giving no mind to which goat was the biggest or smallest, deformed or not, the herder picked up his gun and shot the first 3 goats he saw straight in the head.
   The herder had been told to go get meat for the next day and being in a hurry, the herder did not care one bit whether the goats he shot were "good" goats or not. Unluckily, the first "goat" he happened to see was the fox dressed up as a goat. The fox died instantly.

This is a picture of Ravana's magicians creating an illusion for Sita
(Image Information: Image retrieved from Ramayana)


Author's Note: This story was very loosely based off of Ravana's two magicians that tried to fool Sita. Ravana's magicians had this elaborate plan of fooling Sita into thinking Rama was dead. But amusingly, Prahasta burst in, in the middle of their illusions and Ravana's entire plan ended up backfiring onto himself. Had Prahasta not foolishly burst in, Sita would have believed the magicians and this would then be the story's turning point. The story above has a similar storyline. The fox was trying to fool the goats, but his plan backfired on him, and he ended up getting shot. Had the fox thought more into his plan and not stood foolishly by the door greedily trying to pick out his first meal, his plan would have possibly worked. The ending is a bit drastic to my story, but the overall storyline is similar.

Bibliography: Buck, William (1976). Ramayana: King Rama's Way.

Tuesday, September 23, 2014

Week 6: Reading Diary B

Buck's Ramayana
Reading Notes: Pages 270-324

Important Notes and Thoughts:

  • Rama gets across the river because of Nala and his floating rocks
  • Vibhishana switches sides from Ravana to Rama. I think it's good that Vibhishana switches sides from good to bad but that he refuses to fight his people. Shows that he is loyal but at the same time still wants to do good
  • Ravana has a multiple number of spies on Rama's army: Shuka, Sardula, and Sarana. Almost all of them are sent back with strong messages from Rama
  • Hahah. It's funny to see how badly Ravana's magicians fail. The fact that their illusions completely backfire on Ravana is hilarious. 
  • Ravana wants war. Prahasta is killed. It's also sad that Ravana refuses to listen to anyone, even his giant brother Kumbhakarna. Ravana ends up being the reason that Kumbhakarna is killed. If Ravana had just listened to his brother and given Sita back, then none of this nonsense would have happened. I hope Ravana is ready for the Karma that he is about to receive.
  • Indrajit killed Sugriva, Rama, Lakshmana, Nala, and Angada?! Also would Vibhishana, Hanuman, and Jambavan. What....
  • The Medicine Hill is a cool concept. As Hanuman is running with the medicine hill, the medicine diffuses because of the heat and revives everyone who dies. Only if something like this existed in real life..
  • Indrajit then tries to create yet again, another illusion. This time of killing Sita. Hanuman almost falls for it but smart Vibhishana makes him realize that it is merely an illusion
  • Indrajit and Lakshmana fight. Indrajit gets killed. Ravana decides that it is now time for him to go to war. Once again, all this could be avoided if Ravana hadn't been so forceful of Indrajit participating in all this chaos and fighting Ravana's battles for him. 

Monday, September 22, 2014

Week 6: Reading Diary A

Buck's Ramayana
Reading Notes: Pages 219-270


Important Notes and Thoughts:

  • It's crazy how much more detail Buck's Ramayana has then the Ramayana we read previously. I do not recall learning at all about Sinhika and how Hanuman crushed her heart and escaped through her ear. I also don't remember reading about Hanuman getting kicked by Lanka. 
  • It's funny to me how Sita defies Ravana and does not fall for his sweet seduction but that Ravana can not do anything to harm her. The curse specifically says that if he so much as touches her without her permission, Ravana's head will explode. 
  • I like the fact that Hanuman causes all this chaos in Lanka before he leaves. Hanuman almost feels like he needs to do this after going through so much trouble chasing after Sita and being kicked by Lanka, and etc. 
  • Ravana uses Indrajit to capture Hanuman. But Hanuman ends up burning the entire city of Lanka. I had no idea that Hanuman just left Sita in Lanka with the promise that Rama would come get her. Why didn't Hanuman just take Sita with him? 
  • I hope that Rama goes immediately to his patient and faithful wife and rescues her

Wednesday, September 17, 2014

Week 5 Storytelling: Viradha

      The leaves rustled as the wind carried itself through the trees. The sun started to set and a cold chill spread through the forest. But this didn't bother Macy or Josh at all. They were content with just each other, happily chatting away about their days and their plans for the week. Suddenly, out of no where, a giant shadow cast over Josh and he felt a strong swift fist to his jaw. Josh's past army instincts kicked in within seconds as he tried to flip the man over and pin down whoever it was that had ambushed him. Uncommonly though, whoever he was fighting with knew everyone of his tricks. No matter which way Josh turned, this person was there, deflecting and throwing back every technique and move that Josh had practiced during his 32 years in the army. Macy's screams became weaker and weaker as Josh felt himself growing weary and felt his body giving in. 
      Josh's eyes opened and the first thing he tasted was a metal-like substance between his teeth. He tried to lift himself up and felt his body completely tense up and resist. He swiveled his head around and saw the moon peeping through the trees and EVERYTHING just hit him at once. Where was Macy?! Who had taken her? Why had they been ambushed? What in the world had he ever done to deserve this? And what had MACY ever done?! Josh scrambled around in his pocket and felt his tiny little phone. Quietly thanking God in head, Josh picked up his phone and called his best friend and trustee, Derek. Derek quickly located Josh and reached there in no time. Derek had said on the phone that someone had already contacted him and he knew exactly where Macy was being held. Josh and Derek drove straight to the address that was given to them and found Macy tied up in a chair. She seemed unharmed, just confused. 
      Out of the corner of his eye Josh caught someone else standing by the door. As the man walked out of the shadow, Josh realized that it was no one other than Hyun, the man who had killed his very own brother during World War II.. Rage quickly clouded Josh's head and all he could think about was killing Hyun and taking revenge for his poor brother who was currently laying in his grave. Hyun had left 3 children father-less and a beautiful wife, husband-less. Josh's anger blinded him and he flung himself at Hyun twisting the knife that Hyun was holding straight into Hyun's own stomach. It didn't even hit him that Hyun was just standing there, not even fighting back, till Hyun fell to floor covered in stab wounds and dripping in blood. Hyun mustered the last amount of energy he had, looked into Josh's eyes, whispered "Thank you," then quietly passed away.  
      A bright light suddenly shown down on Hyun and a deep voice bellowed from the background, "Thank you Oh kind Josh. This was Hyun's dying wish and he thanks you for releasing him from this gruesome world and into the boundless grounds of Heaven. He felt like you were the only one that had the right to end his life because he had ended your brother's."

Viradha, the demon, who actually turns out to be Tumburu
(Image Information: Viradha)

Author's Note: This story is based off of the tale of Viradha, the demon who captured Sita. Viradha had been cursed and was told that the only way his curse would be broken and that he could join the love of his life in heaven, would be if Rama took his life. So Viradha planned this giant scheme that caused Lakshmana and Rama to chase after him and end his life. This broke his curse and it turns out that Viradha wasn't who he was thought out to be. Viradha was actually a ghandarva named Tumburu.

Bibliography: Buck, William (1976). Ramayana: King Rama's Way.

Week 5: Reading Diary B

Buck's Ramayana
Reading Notes: Pages 162-218

Notes:

  • Maricha transforms himself as the golden deer and uses his false voice and actions to lure Rama and Lakshmana away from Sita. Ravana then transformed himself as an old man and abducted Sita
  • Jatayu fights with Ravana but Ravana defeats him and takes Sita away. Sita is smart and drops her jewelry on the ground 
  • Ravana had a curse placed on him that stated that if he ever raped another woman again, then his head would explode. That is why he didn't rape Sita and abducted her instead
  • Jatayu tells Lakshmana and Rama that Ravana was the one that kidnapped Sita
  • The first monkey was created. Hanuman stemmed from this creation and was granted eternal life after mistaking the sun for a mango
  • Vali and Sugriva's story is told about Sugriva shutting the doors of the cave while Vali was still inside. Vali got extremely upset and exiled Sugriva. 
  • Vali and Sugriva fight, Rama shoots Vali with an arrow and kills him
  • Sugriva first forgets his promise but then because of Lakshmana, he takes his army of monkeys and heads south to find Sita



Thoughts:
  • It's crazy how the two Ramayana's are so different. I wish all guys had a curse put on them saying that if they ever raped a girl, their head would explode. I'm so glad that Ravana didn't hurt or touch Sita. 
  • This story is SO much more detailed when it comes to these short stories. I had no idea that Vali's wife killed herself with the same arrow that Rama shot Vali with.
  • It's good to hear that even when Vali knew that Rama was the one that shot him, Vali still told his son to help Rama

Monday, September 15, 2014

Week 5: Reading Diary A

Buck's Ramayana
Reading Notes: Pages 110-161.

Notes:

  • Kausalya wakes up to find Dasharatha dead. Bharatha is sent for and when he comes back and hears the news, he is shocked at what his mother has done. 
  • Bharatha rushes into the forrest to look for Rama and bring him back to his rightful place on the throne. But when he finds Rama and tells him that Dasharatha is dead, Rama still refuses to come back and rule. He firmly believes that Dasharatha exiled him and that he will fulfill the exile. 
  • On the last summer of their exile. They meet Agastya. He gives Rama a better bow and warns him about the forest that is ruled by Ravana
  • As they go into the forest they meet Valakhilyas who urge Rama to help them fight the demons
  • Because of a bet that Kadru cheated on, Vinata became Kadru's slave. Vinata's son, Garuda, ransomed his mom and got her back safely with Indra's help.
  • Viradha the demon abducts Sita. Rama and Lakshmana defeat the demon and he turns out to be someone else.. a ghandarva named Tumburu. Apparently Tumburu was cursed to live as a demon and would only be freed if Rama killed him
  • Ravana's sister Shurpanakha wants Rama. He rejects her. Shurpanakha gets mad and attacks Sita. In turn, Lakshmana attacks Shurpanakha and mutilates her. She runs to Ravana who falls in love with Shurpanakha's description of Sita. Ravana gets Maricha to help him capture Sita. 



Thoughts:

  • I think that it's super thoughtful of Bharatha to take back Rama's sandals and put them on the throne in honor of Rama's absence. 
  • I think that after Rama heard about his dad dying, the least he could have done was go back to Ayodha and give his condolences and attend his dad's funeral. I almost think it was disrespectful that he did not do that
  • I really don't like Kadru or her 1000 kids. They seem like a lot of trouble. And I really was convinced that Indra was bad.. so why is Indra helping Garuda get his mom back?
  • That's really smart of Tumburu to abduct Sita, that way Rama kills Tumburu and he is freed from the curse. 

Sunday, September 14, 2014

Week 4: Famous Last Words

I think that my best writing this week was between the weekly story post and my Introduction. I think that when you're allowed to write about something that you're passionate about, it makes writing so much easier. I am the worst at creative writing and it takes a lot of thinking and time for me to get my creative juices flowing, but once I start, it all just kind of flows. I remember starting this class and dreading Wednesdays just because I didn't want to have to make up another story. But recently, it's gotten a lot easier. Now I don't dread the homework for this class, I just wish that the deadlines were a little looser. It's really hard to manage so many science classes and labs and also worry about having Epics of India homework due at midnight every night. I definitely think I need to work on my time management and prioritize my responsibilities better. I have a lot on my plate this semester and I know if I don't manage my time well, I can very easily just fall apart and fail everything. I did read a lot of cool stories this week when working on my comments. I think that's it's so great to see the remakes and twists that people put into the same stories that I've been reading all week. Some peoples' minds are just so creative and out there, I sometimes do wish that I was better at creative writing and thinking. Other than that, I think that everything is just kind of flowing and routines are starting to be established, which is good. Hopefully everything just falls together as time goes on and the semester progresses.

This is how I currently feel about life
(Image Information: Image retrieved from Dream Time)

Wednesday, September 10, 2014

Week 4 Storytelling: Guha and Shiva

Mr. Smith stared nervously at his chicken scratch on the board. He wondered how the kids would react to his goofy introduction and whether they would respect him or not. As the clock hit 12:20, he started to see kids pile into the classroom. Some straight up ignored his "Hello!" and "Good Afternoon!" and others just quietly nodded their head, gave him a soft smile, and took the farthest seat away from the front.
"Ouch.. This is about to be one rough semester" he thought as he glanced at the roster and tried to match the students with their names.
The clock struck 12:30 and the kids on their own calmed down and turned towards the front waiting to see what he had planned.
"Well, at least I don't have to yell or do stupid icebreakers to calm these kids down," he thought nervously to himself.
Right as he was about to clear his throat and start his introduction, the door swung open and this tall scrawny boy walked in. His face had a very nonchalant attitude and his demeanor gave off careless vibes. "Hi. My name is Troy." he muttered as he quickly grabbed the nearest seat.
Mr. Smith's introduction went smoothly, all of the kids laughed and encouraged his goofy self... except for Troy. As the day went on, Mr. Smith realized how much of an outcast Troy was. He didn't want to work with a group, he had the most negative attitude, and every chance he got, he would shoot down Mr. Smith's ideas and suggestions. It's like he wanted to be the class clown and alter the students' mindsets but at the same time he wanted to act cool and not associate or interact with anyone. Mr. Smith decided to just give him time and see how his behavior progressed.
As the days proceeded, Troy's behavior took a dramatic downfall. Troy started arriving extremely late to class, disrespecting the students, back answering/smart mouthing Mr. Smith, leaving in the middle of lecture/discussion, etc. He tried pulling Troy to the side during class and emailing him afterwards, but never got a decent response. After a while, Mr. Smith just realized that his sole goal was to teach and as long as he was impacting enough students, Troy would just have to learn on his own.
As the end of the semester neared, Troy's grades dropped further and further. One day Mr. Smith was sitting on his desk grading papers and planning the final when he heard a soft knock at his door. Mr. Smith motioned for whoever it was to come in through the small little window. A couple seconds later, Troy came strolling in. He had a guilt-ridden look on his face. Mr. Smith put his papers to the side and looked up at Troy, "What can I help you with Troy?"
Troy grabbed a chair and pulled it up to Mr. Smith's desk. "Mr. Smith, I came here to sincerely apologize. I know I've made your first semester teaching at this school extremely hard and I'm sorry. I've had a really rough semester with my family and friends. A lot has changed in my life and nothing seems right anymore. I don't know where I fit in, I don't know who my true friends are, I'm not even sure what major or career path I want to follow. I used to be so strong and confident and now i'm weak and feel like a coward. I feel like I just use my carefree attitude as a mask to cover how I really feel. But Mr. Smith, I really am drowning. My grades are terrible in this class and if I don't pass this class, I know that I won't be able to move on to any of my major-related classes. Is there anyway that you can help me?"
Mr. Smith just sat there in utter shock and silence. Out of every kid in his class, this was the last person he had expected to walk in and say all this stuff. Mr. Smith sat there for a minute just absorbing everything that Troy had just said. Troy had really been the worst student and had given him such hard times. But then he thought back to the role of being a teacher. This was his job. He had signed a contract when he became a teacher to work with every single student and treat each one fairly. Mr. Smith pulled out a blank sheet of paper and told Troy they were going to make a mini timeline, things that Troy could do to bring his grade up to a C, homework and quizzes that he could possibly make-up, extra-credit that the class would be given before the final, and studying tips for the final itself.

As the last few weeks progressed, Mr. Smith noticed the progress that Troy was making. He really was such a brilliant and passionate student. If only Troy had done this earlier, then this semester would have worked so well in his favor. Troy ended up making a C in the class and actually passing the final with flying colors. Troy nor Mr. Smith could believe how much Troy and his work ethic had changed over the semester.

Troy now understood that even though problems constantly arise and occur, life is life. These things will never stop or just disappear. Troy realized that school is and always will be a top priority. When it's time for class, all problems and worries should be left at the door and his sole focus should be in class.



Shiva: The All-Forgiving
(Image Information: Photo retrieved from Shiva)


Author's Note: This was a remake to Guha's story in Buck's Ramayana. When Rama, Sita, and Lakshmana were received by Guha in the forest, he told them how he had rejected Shiva's priests and kicked the statue of Shiva everyday. But when Guha died and was being lead to Yama's realm, Shiva actually rescued him because he considered Guha to be his most devout follower. This story was just a modern little tale showing how even though Troy was so disrespectful and mean to his teacher, when Troy was drowning, Mr. Smith was the one that rescued him.

Bibliography: Buck, William (1976). Ramayana: King Rama's Way.

Tuesday, September 9, 2014

Week 4: Reading Diary B

Buck's Ramayana
Reading Notes: Pages 60-109.

Important Notes:

  • This version of Ramayana shows more of the details. Now the readers knows that Kaikeyi wasn't out to get Rama at first, her mind was actually changed by her servant, Manthara. 
  • Either way, Kaikeyi forces Dasharatha to obey her two promises. So he makes Bharatha King and throws Rama into exile for 14 years
  • The last Ramayana we read also didn't tell us about the citizens causing the delay of one night by raising the river up, that's interesting and definitely shows their love and dedication to Rama
  • Guha is also a new character. I like Guha and how devout he is to Shiva after the series of events that occurred in his life
  • Kaikeyi asking Dasharatha to teach her the language of the animals even though she knew it would cost him his life, is very selfish of her to do. I am glad that Dasharatha overheard the animals and made his own decision
  • Lakshmana builds a house for the exile and his friends, called Bharadwaja's Ashram
  • Dasharatha's death is related back to that karma story when one day he shot a little boy with an arrow on accident and the dad placed a curse on Dasharatha, telling him that he would be separated with his sons during death. 




Thoughts and Predictions:

  • Rama is one brave and courageous guy. If I was thrown into exile by my father or mother for 1 day, let alone 14 years, I would be extremely upset and question their decision. Rama went into exile without even knowing WHY. 
  • I can't believe that even as Rama is leaving, he's asking his father not to be upset with Kaikeyi. I feel like Rama is my role model in life. I wish I was even 3% as great of a person as Rama. 
  • Guha's story actually reminds me of a story we have in my culture about Prophet Muhammad. There was this lady and she was very envious and hated the Prophet. Everyday, when he would walk by, she would throw trash and other items out her window and hit him on purpose. This happened for many years. One day, she fell very ill and after the Prophet realized that the trash hadn't been thrown on him for a couple of days, he went up her apartment to check up on her. She was dying. She begged him to let her die, but instead, he took care of her and nursed her back to complete health. She begged for forgiveness from the Prophet and he forgave her. She then became a devout follower

Monday, September 8, 2014

Week 4: Reading Diary A

Buck's Ramayana
Reading Notes: Pages 1-59

Important Notes:

  • Valmilki turns into a poet because she curses the hunter of a dying bird and her curse comes out in a song format. Brahma tells the Ramayana to Valmilki who then in turn tells the Ramayana to Lava and Kush; the sons of Rama
  • Ravana challenges Indra who then goes and begs Vishnu to incarnate himself and defeat Ravana
  • The rahshasas are like 3 demon children. Vishnu kills Mali, but the other two escape to the Naga Kingdoms
  • Sumali, one of the escaped demon children, sent his daughter Kaikasi to have Vishravas's babies. Four more rahshasas appeared. 10 headed Ravana, giant Kumbhakarna, good guy Vibhishana, and demon-daughter Shurpanakha. 
  • Ravana was a demon of many powers. Only thing that could defeat him was a human. Ravana was given the city of Lanka by Vaishravana and got married and had a son named Meghanda
  • Ravana caused a lot of chaos and pain. Even when Vaishravana asked him to stop, he didn't. Instead he went and attacked Mount Kailasa where Vaishravana was staying.. 
  • Ravana ended up getting cursed by Indra and by Shiva's bull, Nandi. 
  • Ravana tried being smart and attacking the King while he was bathing. King caught him and squeezed him with his 50 arms
  • Ravana conquered Yama, Surya, Chandra, and almost Amaravati. Indra was captured by Ravana's son and thus got the name Indrajit.
  • Rama becomes Vishwamitra's student 
  • Rama releases Ahalya from her curse that was placed on her by her husband who caught her in bed with Indra
  • Rama breaks the bow of Shiv and is now allowed to marry Sita. Rama's 3 other brothers also marry girls from the same family as Sita. Then Dasharatha brings his sons and their wives back to Ayodha.  



Thoughts and Predictions:

  • Why does Rama exile Sita because of gossip? I definitely thought their love was truer and more mature than that.. I wish there was more on why Rama exiled her instead of confronting her for the truth.
  • How did a random "good demon" appear from demon Sumali's daughter and Vishravas? This makes me want to do some genetics and find out the probability of a demon girl and a good guy getting married and looking at the odds of the child becoming a demon or not. 
  • I think that Ravana is such a trouble maker. I feel like he has no morals or ethics. Trying to harm someone that gave you the city you live in is super messed up.. I'm glad he got cursed. Hopefully Karma gets to him
  • I hate how Narada is such an instigator. I feel like Narada is constantly starting fights and urging Ravana to challenge other gods and characters
  • That family marriage was really sudden and weird. It's crazy how that worked out and how all 3 brothers found enough girls in that family to marry them.



Wednesday, September 3, 2014

Week 3 Storytelling: Hanuman in Ravana's Court

      Hanuman pats himself on the back as he realizes the clever plan that he's made up. If he lets Ravana somehow capture him, then maybe, just maybe, he can convince Ravana to give up his foolishness and surrender to Rama. So instead of sneaking around quietly in the woods and trying to avoid trouble, Hanuman starts causing crazy ruckus and chaos around the kingdom in hopes that Ravana will hear about it and come out to capture him. Sure enough, after about 30 minutes of troubling the citizens of the land and causing mad chaos, Indrajit sneaks up behind Hanuman and captures him. When Hanuman wakes up, he is surrounded by Ravana and his entire court. 
Ravana looks at him and says, "What are you doing here Hanuman? Why are you causing trouble in my Kingdom? For even stepping foot here, I should have you killed."
Hanuman looks up and says, "Ravana, do you know how strong Rama is? You have taken Rama's most precious possession and love of his life, Sita. You have broken his heart and led him on a wild goose chase around so many countries. Rama is overwrought and will definitely defeat you when he gets the chance. Don't you think that maybe you should surrender instead of embarrassing yourself later on?"
       A flash of anger passes through Ravana's eyes and then a conniving smile falls in it's place, "Hanuman, you think that Rama, out of everyone, can defeat me? You must be out of your mind. I am better than Rama in every way, shape, and form. I can defeat Rama with my eyes closed and I will show this to you as soon as I get my hands on Rama. That coward doesn't deserve a beautiful woman like Sita. You are a fool Hanuman and you deserve to be killed."
Before Hanuman can respond, Vibhishana steps in and says, "Ravana, my dearest brother, stop! Hanuman is only telling you this for your own good. Why not listen to him and give him a chance to explain himself? Hanuman is loyal to his friends and it is not fair that you kill him just because he is here to warn you about what his friends might do to you. Why don't you show him the truth of your words instead and kill Rama first? Actions speak louder than words Ravana."
Ravana chews over everything that Vibhishana just said and decides that Vibhishana is absolutely right. But Ravana isn't content with just letting Hanuman off with a warning. No God, let alone a foolish Monkey God, can walk in here and just insult him the way that he did. So without warning, Ravana sets Hanuman's tail on fire and tells the court to dismiss him and throw him out in the forest. The guards pick Hanuman and his burning tail up and start guiding him to the gates of the city. Before they realize what's going on, Hanuman turns around, whips his tail, and quietly but quickly sends out a curse that burns the entire city of Lanka down. 


(Image Information: Photo retrieved from Ravana burning Hanuman's tail)


Author's Note: I chose this story because when I was doing my reading assignment earlier, I realized that the story of Rama and Hanuman in itself, could have so many added details and dialogue. I was already imagining the extra events and details when reading and when I saw this as one of the prompts, I decided it was a great way to portray what I was thinking in my head when reading the story. My main goal of this story was to show what Ravana and Hanuman were thinking while they were interacting.


Bibliography: Narayan, R. K. (1972) The Ramayana.

Tuesday, September 2, 2014

Week 3: Reading Diary B

The Ramayana by R.K Narayan
Reading Notes: Pages 131-171.

Important Notes:

  • Hanuman rescues Sita. Right as she is thinking about committing suicide, he comes in, shows her the jewelry, and destroys the Ashoka Vana where Sita is kept guarded
  • Hanuman comes up with a plan and gets himself captured by Ravana's son Indrajit. He tells Ravana to surrender to Rama but Ravana is stubborn and doesn't want to listen. Instead he burns the tail of Hanuman and in turn, Hanuman burns the entire city down
  • Ravana is mad that a monkey, of all animals, attacked him and his city. Vibhishana offers Ravana really good advice and tells him about all the curses he is under and that he should release Sita. Ravana rejects the advice because he feels almighty and powerful.
  • Vibhishana comes to Rama and asks for asylum
  • Rama then asks the sea god to help him cross the sea to Lanka. 
  • Ravana tries really hard to trick Sita and convince her that Rama and Lakshman are dead
  • The battle gets really really intense. Rama defeats Kumbakarna and Mahodara. Lakshman defeats Indrajit. 
  • Rama and Ravana fight and Ravana is finally defeated
  • Sita is put to the test of purity by Rama
  • Rama returns to Ayodha


Thoughts and Predictions: 
  • When Ravana tries to trick Sita and Vishnu breaks the power of Rama's stun and brings him to Ravana, where is Sita then? It's almost like she just disappears. If she had been with Ravana at that time, it would have been the perfect opportunity for her to return to Rama
  • I feel like it's really weird that Rama out of all people doubts Sita. Sita is so loyal and loving towards him and Rama is usually so trusting. But I guess everyone has their doubts sometimes and Sita was Ravana's captive for a very long time...
  • I'm happy that Rama finally returns to Ayodha. It's sad that he spent 14 years in exile and went through so many problems and battles. But it's also great to see how fast time flew by and how him, Sita, Lakshman, and Hanuman made it through. 

Week 3: Reading Diary A

The Ramayana  by R.K Narayan
Reading Notes. Pages 89-130.

Important Notes:

  • Ravana kidnaps Sita against her will and takes her away 
  • Hanuman, the God Monkey, is finally introduced. He is very loyal to Sugriva. 
  • Sugriva promises Rama that if they help him defeat Vali, then Sugriva will help them find Sita 
  • Rama once again helps defeat someone bad. He help Lakshman, Hanuman, and Sugriva defeat Vali. Rama uses his arrow and Vali recognizes it and first deems the entire situation wrong but then changes his opinion right before he dies. 
  • Sugriva is so caught up in how own life that he forgets his promise to Rama. Lakshman ends up going to visit and Sugriva and arranges a meeting for him and Rama. 
  • Search parties are sent out for Sita. Hanuman and Angada reach the end of the ocean and still cannot find Sita anywhere
  • Sampathi in return for Rama giving her wings, tells Rama that she saw Ravana take Sita to Lanka

 
Predictions and Thoughts: 
  • My first predictions were right about Ravana! Ravana kidnapped Sita against her wishes and took her. I'm surprised he didn't just take her back to his kingdom and instead is taking Rama and Lakshmana on a goose chase. 
  • I don't understand why Hanuman disguised himself as a scholar when Rama and Lakshman came.. He seems like a character that I could follow. 
  • I really don't like Vali. He seems very short-tempered and unreasonable. I also can't believe that he stole his brother's wife. I wish we could hear the wife's story and thoughts. Maybe about running away and staying with her husband or liking Vali from the beginning and just using Sugriva? 
  • When I read that part about the curse and Mount Matanga, I instantly assumed that Hanuman, Lakshman, and Rama would get Vali to come to Mount Matanga and that way they wouldn't even have to fight him, the curse would kill him. But he was defeated another way. 
  • What I noticed while reading this was how much time has passed since Sita has been away.. Rama and Lakshman spend an entire rainy season in the forest. I feel like that's a lot of time and I wonder what Sita must be going through. I wish we could hear her side of the story right now. 
  • It's so cool to see the effect Rama still has on others. For example, when Sampathi hears Rama's name, her wings instantly grow back. Rama has such great bonds and connections with almost everyone he meets. 

Wednesday, August 27, 2014

Week 2 Storytelling: Rama Chases the Deer

As Rama is running after this golden deer. He thinks, "Man Sita would be so ecstatic and proud if I walked in what she wanted! This golden deer is so flawless and beautiful. Sita would know how heroic and brave I was if came back leading the deer and was able to put it right in her lap. Sita is so beautiful, she deserves the most beautiful item right beside her at all times."
This gives Rama motivation to run faster and faster.
"Wow this deer is crazy fast though. It seems like this deer really knows where it's going. What if I don't catch up to it? What if I lose it and come back empty handed to Sita? What would Sita say?"
Rama ponders this as the deer gets faster and has more confident in it's step.
Rama then notices a small short cut and realizes that maybe if he outsmarted the deer then he could catch it and take it back to his beloved princess Sita. He was willing to do anything to make sure that Sita always had that perfect smile on her face.
Rama decided to back up and go underneath a cave and took a shortcut a little bit farther down the forrest. He thought he was being smart, but weirdly, the deer was smarter. The deer knew of a better and faster shortcut track. Finally, Rama decided he was done.
He slung up his bow and shot the golden deer right in his heart!


(Image Information: Photo retrieved by: Rama )


Author's Note: I chose this prompt from the list given because I felt like this was an interesting and simple prompt to elaborate on. My main goals for this story are to show what Rama is thinking while running after the golden deer. 

Bibliography: 

  • Narayan, R. K. (1972) The Ramayana